STOP THINKING LIKE AN UNDERGRADUATE
The Master's SOP Formula
An A-Z blueprint for writing a brilliant statement of purpose that fills you with confidence, floods your inbox with admission offers, and launches your career as a graduate student.
I NEED THIS! LETâS DO IT âFINALLY, ANSWER THE QUESTIONâŚ
âWhat do universities want me to write?â
You've spent hours staring at a blinking cursor, trying to summon the perfect words that will land your application in your dream schoolâs "YES" pile.
DOES ANY OF THIS SOUND FAMILIAR�
- That all-important application deadline is looming, but youâre not sure where to start, so you keep putting it off.
- Youâve read EVERY article Google offers about how to write a statement of purpose, but nothing really made intuitive sense, and now you're questioning yourself.
- You still have no idea what it is universities REALLY want to see in the students they admit.
- You drafted your SOP, then went online to compare it to âessays that worked!â â and now youâre realizing your essay will most certainly NOT work.
âŚdonât worry â youâre in the right place.
Thereâs just one thing standing between you and an inbox full of acceptance letters.
Yes, the Statement of Purpose.
Thereâs a ton of pressure riding on this essay. But that doesnât mean you need to stay on the typical applicantâs agonizing path:
ANALYSIS PARALYSIS
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PROCRASTINATION
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IMPOSTER SYNDROME
 The more time ticks away toward your deadline, the less you feel like a qualified student, and the more you start to question whether or not youâre even cut out for grad school.
UnlessâŚ
You had an SOP strategy thatâs easy-to-follow, that immediately makes you feel proud and accomplished, and that hundreds of other students have used to earn multiple master's admissions.
On average, you're competing with 50 other potential grad students for every one available spot.
– COUNCIL OF GRADUATE SCHOOLS
So, how can you make sure you're the one?
INTRODUCING
The Masterâs SOP Formula
The only comprehensive, step-by-step roadmap for writing SOPs that grad schools LOVE to read. It's time to turn your grad school applications into âadmissionâ magnets.
YES PLEASE â SIGN ME UP â"It helped me tremendously... it was just the right amount of support."
Hey Jordan, just writing in to update on the status of my applications! They went amazingly well! I'm an international reapplicant this year and I applied to 12 schools and received interviews at 9 of them. I wouldn't be surprised if that number could have been 11 schools because my interviewers mentioned they really enjoyed reading my SOP. I received acceptances from Emory, MIT, and Cornell this cycle and turned down remaining interviews.
I just want to thank you for your amazing course and the amount of effort you put into it because it helped me tremendously. The course had sufficient depth to help organize my thoughts and improve my writing skills. I found myself incorporating your tips beyond my SOP to apply to scientific writing in general, e.g. applying for conferences and helping my professor out with grants! I received encouraging feedback from postdocs reading my SOP and one of them assumed I paid for an editing service, which was really flattering, haha.
Ultimately, it was up to me to evaluate my own writing/thinking and your lessons were an extra push in the right direction. I think it was just the right amount of support provided, and having to think through the process on my own with your guidance facilitated my learning of fundamental writing techniques/habits and helped me regain confidence in my rusty writing skills. Thank you!
â Jena, Immunobiology
MODULE 1
What Problems Do You Want to Solve in Your Career?
Set the foundation for an A+ competitive SOP. In this module, we'll reverse-engineer your success and gain TOTAL clarity about how grad school will launch you toward a deeply rewarding career.
WHAT YOUâLL LEARN:
- Conquer the #1 MOST COMMON MISTAKE that makes 70% of SOPs seem "average"
- Show why your career is important for you, for society, AND for your dream school too
- Articulate your "why" (when universities ask, "What will you contribute?" this is EXACTLY what they want to see)
- Craft a brilliant âSentence of Purpose" that immediately tells admissions committees youâre someone to pay attention to
MODULE 2
Why Is This School the Perfect Place to Prepare for Your Career?
The most important part of your SOP! In this module, weâll make sure youâre in the top 30% of âviable applicantsâ by crafting a clear plan for your studies, and connecting it to your professional future.
WHAT YOUâLL LEARN:
- Convince universities that you're more mature and thoughtful about your career than other applicants
- Discover why this is the SINGLE MOST IMPORTANT part of your SOP
- Craft a detailed 'Study Plan' so the admissions committee knows EXACTLY how you'll succeed if they admit you
- Save weeks of effort by easily recycling these paragraphs for all your applications
MODULE 3
How Are You Qualified to Pursue This Career?
Selling yourself is easy. Itâs not about fancy undergrad credentials or GPA. Itâs about using simple logic to show that you can solve the problems people in your dream career (and in this grad school) tackle every day.
WHAT YOUâLL LEARN:
- Establish hard, verifiable proof that you're capable of achieving your professional goals (and pursuing even bigger ones in the future)
- Quickly turn this proof into a sophisticated prose argument
- Prove to yourself that no matter what happened in the past, you have the specific skillset necessary to succeed as a master's student today
- Transform your CV into a sales pitch â itâs easier than you think!
MODULE 4
Why Do You Care About These Career Goals? What's Your Story?
Everybody has a story. Most people just tell the wrong one! Stand out as wildly unique in the applicant pool by using our foolproof 1-2-3 template to explain how you grew dedicated to these career goals (remembering that your dream school loves these goals too).
WHAT YOUâLL LEARN:
- The most powerful technique Iâve ever found for making an applicant immediately interesting to grad admissions readers
- Follow specific templates to make the writing easy, even if youâve never considered yourself a writer or âcreativeâ at all
- Avoid the Top 3 âFirst Paragraphâ problems that turn a smart SOP into a gimmicky "kiss of death"
- Ensure that your essay is just as intriguing as those from the best WriteIvy alumni at MIT, Stanford, and more
MODULE 5
How Will You Conclude This Academic Journey?
Wrap up your SOP with power and harmony.
WHAT YOUâLL LEARN:
- Craft a bold "Career Goals Statement" to show the reader exactly where your master's journey will take you
- Master the four elements of a powerful conclusion
- Follow the examples of 10 high-achieving students with sample essays and templates (I'm giving you all their tricks!)
- Make your reader feel GLAD they discovered you in the applicant pileÂ
MODULE 6
Putting It All Together
Once you have all the necessary ingredients for a stellar SOP, it's time to put them together so it flows beautifully and logically. After this, there will be nothing left to do besides hit 'submit!'
WHAT YOUâLL LEARN:
- Follow a point-by-point outline for EVERY word of your SOP
- Learn to craft smart transitions so your writing always feels natural â NEVER clunkyÂ
- Borrow 13 tried-and-true techniques to meet any word limit (500 words? No problem!)
- How to guarantee you get REALLY HELPFUL feedback from your mentors, professors, and LOR writers
PLUS, snag these bonuses to help guarantee your SOP is the best it can be...
BONUS 1
60 Days of Private SOP Support
($500 VALUE)
We get itâeven with the best course in the world, sometimes you just want your questions answered.
That's why you get 60 days of Q&A support starting from your enrollment date.
During this time, you'll be able to ask any question you have related to The Master's SOP Formula and get it answered directly by Jordan.
(If you've looked at admissions consultants before, you already know that a good SOP expert will charge thousands of dollarsâway more than the price of this courseâfor far less support than this. We can only offer this to you as a bonus because Jordan limits 1-on-1 clients so he can devote more time to you.
BONUS 2
The WriteIvy Sample SOP Library
($200 VALUE)
See exactly how and what students wrote to earn admission to schools like Stanford, Harvard, Oxford, and more.
You'll get access to 22Â Sample Essays fully diagrammed and annotated to show you, step-by-step, how they implemented the SOP Formula and exactly how you can use the same design. The sample library includes essays from all kinds of academic fields, and all of which earned admission to multiple (competitive!) schools. One got 13 admissions!
BONUS 3
Expanded Guide: Personal Essays and Diversity Statements
($100 VALUE)
When schools ask you to write more essays on top of the SOPâŚit can feel a little tedious, canât it?
Thatâs why Jordan revised his guide to personal essays so you can feel clear-sighted and confident about about turning your lifeâs story into a mature argument for why youâll be a great addition to any graduate community.
This includes detailed descriptions of the 3 topics all great personal essays illustrate in some form or another (Diversity, Adversity, or the Broad Social Impact of your Career). Plus, as a Bonus Bonus, Jordan has diagrammed superlative sample essays from a pair of studentsâfrom completely different lives and experiencesâadmitted to the #1 program in their fields.
BONUS 4
Meeting Word Limits: SOP Formula Complete Walkthrough
($100 VALUE)
Sometimes, the hardest part of writing an essay isnât the first draft, but carving it down for brutal word-limit requirements. Believe me, we get it!
So, in this walkthrough, you can follow along as Jordan works through every exercise in The Masterâs SOP Formula. First, he produces a fictional SOP of 970 words.
Then, he shows you how to edit it down to a tidy 770.
THENâŚhe carves it down to a crazy 462 words.
No matter how short or long your SOP needs to be, weâll help you get there.
Plus, after finishing the course, you'll have access to add-on SOP Review and Editing services â directly with Jordan â for as low as $150.
Honestly, you probably wonât need extra help.
When I used to do 1-on-1 editing for students who had NOT taken the course, it required 4-6 heavy revisions and approximately 6-10 hours of editing before they generated an SOP I considered A+. This took, at minimum, 2 weeks, and often 4 weeks or more.
However, for students who HAVE TAKEN the course, there are three outcomes:
- 70-80% do not need any further helpâthey already have an A+ essay
- 10-20% only require a single "review" (not full editing)
- A few students still want actual line editing (usually international students with language obstacles), but they now only require one revision to get an A+ SOP
Thus, the course is like a warp speed jump to a high-quality essay, and my personal goal was to make it so good, no one feels like they need further help to succeed in academia.
To show you what I mean, here's feedback from some past students:
What Our Brilliant Alumni Have to Say...
"I must admit, the final product is next-level â well beyond what I thought I was capable of producing. This is my writing but I never thought my SOP could be this good. It was an extension of my identity, and quite a self-actualizing experience."
- Carly, Biomaterials Engineering
"I have never felt so proud, confident, and excited in my entire life. Your insight and expertise gave me a sense of ease and confidence which allowed me to submit applications to schools I never expected to accept me!"
- Amanda, Nursing
"Overall, I got accepted to 6 schools with 2 waitlists and ZERO rejections! Given my GPA of 3.29/4.0, and lack of academic publications or strong credentials, I think it's pretty safe to say that my essays were OBJECTIVELY stellar."
- Lee, Electrical Engineering
"Once again, thank you so much for your help. When I sat down to write my SOP, I felt totally lost, but reading through your tips helped me narrow down my focus into a really specific area of interest, which I think majorly helped my application."
-Â Intensely Private Stanford Admit
When you enroll today, hereâs what youâll get:
-  All six modules of The Masterâs SOP Formula [$497 value]
- Â 60 days of private SOP support [$500 value]
- Â Sample SOP Library [$200 value]
- Â Expanded Guide to Personal/Diversity Essays [$100 value]
-  Meeting Word Limits: SOP Formula Walkthrough [$100 value]Â
Thatâs a total value of at least $1,397!
And that's not counting the value of the results you'll get if you follow this formula and put in the work...
The confidence that comes from knowing you've written exactly what faculty want to read, that you've proven youâre qualified for an awesome career, and of course...the admissions that'll follow when you've shown your true potential.
If this sounds like exactly what you've been looking for, you can get instant access to the course via the enrollment options below. But before you join, please make sure you're ready to do the work so you can get the results you want and deserve.
Because all sales are final.
If you're ready and excited to get started, choose the enrollment option that works best for you. Once you submit your order, you'll receive an email with your access information so you can start right away with your course content and bonuses.
Choose the plan that’s right for you…
Sign up for The Master’s SOP Formula today and start checking your grad school apps off your list, one by one.
WriteIvy students have been accepted into graduate programs at:
HIGHLIGHTS INCLUDE…
Multiple MSCS admits at Carnegie Mellon and Stanford (with full funding through assistantships!)
One student earned 13 MPH admissions – including multiple Top-5
One married couple was admitted to 9 of the same MSIM programs
Dozens of students with sub-3.0 GPAs were admitted to multiple schools
Add yourself to the list of WriteIvy’s thousands of success stories.
Meet Your Instructor
Hi, Iâm Jordan, your SOP coach. After reading and editing thousands of admissions essays, Iâm sharing the universal lessons of essay writing that have helped countless students land their dream schools and transform their lives.
Iâve celebrated SO MANY TIMES with students who never imagined they could write an SOP that made them so proud, let alone earn them admission to the top grad programs.
Thatâs what I want to share with you.
If youâre a masterâs applicant of any kind, you owe it to yourself to take this dive and see how your applications transform when you stop googling, stop guessing, and instead, follow a plan thatâs worked a thousand times at virtually every elite university you can think of.
The Masterâs SOP Formula is perfect for you ifâŚ
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- You're dreaming of a high-income career, and you know the SOP is your ticket to the most competitive grad schools
- You feel awkward when you write, you're not sure if you're on the right track, and you're looking for a way to stand out from your competition
- You're spending way too much time trying to figure out what to write to convince admissions officers to give you the green light
- Youâre tired of vague, frustrating advice about admissions essays, and you just want to write an SOP thatâs sharp, intelligent, and conveys what schools want to see (in just the right way)
- Youâre motivated to invest the next two weeks in brainstorming, outlining, and writing a deeply meaningful SOP that can dramatically alter your chances of admission.Â
If youâre a masterâs applicant with ambitious goals and you want to give yourself the best possible chances of admissionâŚ
Yes, this course is for you!
"This course astounded me.
The lessons aren’t just instructions for writing an SOP, but totally made me rethink the whole application process. Let me just say this: I don’t think there is ANYONE who shouldn’t read these lessons before they apply to grad school, regardless of the programs they apply to."
– Wang Z., Economics
FAQs
Questions your fellow grad applicants asked before they enrolled in The Master's SOP Formula
I'm feeling overwhelmed by all the things I'll need to write before my deadlines. Are you sure I can do this?
Will I need to invest in any other training to write my SOP?
I havenât written anything in SO LONG. Will this be too advanced for me?
When I join The Masterâs SOP Formula, will I be getting immediate access to all the lessons and modules?
Will Jordan be available and accessible to answer questions if I get stuck?
How many sample SOPs will I get to see?
Can I pay the first monthly installment and then cancel my enrollment?
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